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Age 29, Male
Soviet Russia
Joined on 1/24/13
Posted by Kiloru - February 4th, 2015
I've finally kicked off my exams. So... Working of ASPECT continues.
I have some real support of some of my friends, and it allows me to work faster and more productive.
I continue drawing character battle and world map sprites; also, i write a dialogues and correcting plot to avoid logical collapces. As side-effect, i advanced setting's lore (like mechanics of magic, cultural features of nations and history of world). It's kinda interesting, in fact.
Wish me good luck x]
EDIT
Kinda fixed.
You need to make either
1) Less levels of shadows on the left man's pants OR
2) More variable shadows on the left man's pants
Let's call the left guy #1 and those to the right from him #2, #3, etc.
For 1) I advise you make the shadows on #1 like on #2
For 2) I advise you make the shadows on #1 like on #4.
In general: using many levels of shadows and making them all same/parallel (not actually adding any detail by adding more levels of shadows) produces "weirdness" effect, low-quality, and THAT is what Djjaner-guy below me wanted to say.
Suppose, it was overkill. okay, i've fixed it
At least SOMEONE besides me commented, you can be proud of that, Yay!
guess who's back and ready to help with that stuff
I'm not a professional critic to tell you describe a more accurate mistakes. Otherwise, it does not look bad.
I didn't try to offend you. At least, I tried to understand, which one of five sprites looks weird x]
@Djjaner
You can try in your head to do various things with the image and after each change evaluate if that made anything better, and after finishing the analysis you'd be able to then tell what's wrong with the image and how it can be improved. You don't need to be a "professional" to do that. Besides, I thought you were a good artist? If you can draw well, you should be fine finding mistakes in drawings?
Djjaner
It looks weird. More trying. ;)
Kiloru
What concrete things look weird? I need more detailed feedback, man