Djjaner 2015-02-04 10:00:38

It looks weird. More trying. ;)

kkots 2015-02-04 18:36:47

You need to make either
1) Less levels of shadows on the left man's pants OR
2) More variable shadows on the left man's pants
Let's call the left guy #1 and those to the right from him #2, #3, etc.
For 1) I advise you make the shadows on #1 like on #2
For 2) I advise you make the shadows on #1 like on #4.

In general: using many levels of shadows and making them all same/parallel (not actually adding any detail by adding more levels of shadows) produces "weirdness" effect, low-quality, and THAT is what Djjaner-guy below me wanted to say.

kkots 2015-02-04 22:21:55

At least SOMEONE besides me commented, you can be proud of that, Yay!

StarksNotDead 2015-02-05 15:40:53

guess who's back and ready to help with that stuff

Djjaner 2015-02-06 17:00:33

I'm not a professional critic to tell you describe a more accurate mistakes. Otherwise, it does not look bad.

kkots 2015-02-07 19:11:27

@Djjaner
You can try in your head to do various things with the image and after each change evaluate if that made anything better, and after finishing the analysis you'd be able to then tell what's wrong with the image and how it can be improved. You don't need to be a "professional" to do that. Besides, I thought you were a good artist? If you can draw well, you should be fine finding mistakes in drawings?